The Hollywood Model As A Screenwriting Tool (With Examples)

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We write a lot about the various narrative story structures that screenwriters use to write their screenplays. Still, one we haven’t covered yet is The Hollywood Model, or what’s known in Denmark as the “Berettermodellen.”

So what is The Hollywood Model exactly?

The Hollywood Model describes the way a film’s journey builds suspense and tension throughout the overall story and is useful as both a film analysis and screenwriting tool. Where other story structure systems can get mired down in outlining the individual beats of a character’s journey down to an exact page number, The Hollywood Model is less about the minutiae of storytelling as it is about the inertia!

In a way, this model is better at capturing the perpetual motion of big Hollywood films better than the traditional story arc model, which is more aligned with following every beat of Joseph Campbell’s “Hero’s Journey” and can leave some Hollywood films feeling formulaic.

Here is the visual diagram of The Hollywood Model in action:

In The Hollywood Model, a story begins with a sudden impact; something that draws you into the world of the story and the characters in a meaningful way. 

We then take a step back to introduce the characters and the world they inhabit, developing them and the surrounding tension over time to a point of no return

From the point of no return, the characters are now on a collision course of conflict escalation leading to an inevitable climax.

At the climax, the central tension is resolved, and the suspense driving the story is relaxed, faded out through a resolution that brings us back to the normal state of things before the initial impact of the story began in the first place.

In reality, the curve isn’t as smooth as it appears in the model. There will always be small bumps, dips, and pauses (or pauses that seem like pauses). A movie is a rocky road, but the overarching tension curve follows the model’s line.

Simple enough to follow, right? So what makes The Hollywood Model different from other narrative story structure systems? 

We’ll break that down, as well as how The Hollywood Model gives the writer a little more freedom to be creative with how their character’s journey ebbs and flows while still keeping the story’s overall emphasis on a rising conflict that needs to be resolved by the end of the film. 

Let’s dive in! 

The beats of The Hollywood Model with examples. 

Before we discuss why a writer might choose The Hollywood Model over other story structure systems, let’s break down the individual beats of the diagram above with examples from familiar films to hone in on what makes this model unique. 

Beat 1: The initial impact.

Every traditional story begins with a character living in a normal world. As writers, we learn early that beginning every story with the main character waking up is far from the most original way to begin a story. 

The Impact beat of The Hollywood Model is a brilliant way to shake yourself out of the mindsight that your story has to start in a “normal way” just because your story’s protagonist begins their journey in a normal world. 

The idea is to intrigue the audience immediately while hinting at the tone and themes present in what’s to come.

Think about how some films start off in the middle of the action, then go back and explain what’s happening later – like how we meet Indiana Jones in the middle of a temple raid in Raiders of the Lost Ark.

Source: Raiders of the Lost Ark on Film-Grab.

Other films will begin with a flashback and then explain it later, like Goodfellas, The Departed, Wolf of Wallstreet, or really any Martin Scorsese movie!

Source: Goodfellas on Film-Grab.

If you are telling a non-linear story, you can also use some combination of both, like Quentin Tarantino does in Inglorious Basterds and Kill Bill Vol. 1, respectively.

Source: Kill Bill Vol. 1 on Film-Grab.

In both, we open on a flashback that we enter in the middle of with very little exposition. As we watch the scene and/or sequence play out, we are immediately gripped before jumping forwards or backward in time to learn more about the narrative consequences of the initial “impact” we just experienced through the next beat: the introduction.

Beat 2: The introduction.

The introduction is when the story orients us in the “normal” world of the story. 

After experiencing an exciting first sequence that gets us hooked into the story, the introduction presents us with everything we need to know: the time, the place, the characters, and the stakes. It’s essentially the ‘who,’ ‘what,’ ‘where,’ ‘when,’ and ‘why’ of the storytelling necessary to get the audience on board with the rest of the film. 

While an introduction is pretty self-explanatory, I like to point out how the more creative you are with this beat, the better. Think about the wacky way Wes Anderson introduces us to the eccentric character of Max and the world he inhabits in the film Rushmore through a series of whimsical silhouettes:

Source: Rushmore on Film-Grab.

We learn that Max is in love with everything about his school except the actual school part, and how this is now a conflict for him if he wishes to remain at Rushmore. 

Beyond the initial introduction, The Hollywood Model then suggest it’s time for development.

Beat 3: The development. 

Development is where you flesh out the world of the character, and we learn more about their aspirations and fears and their relationships with other characters in the world.

We also begin to understand how the conflict from the initial impact is created or continued. This is where other story structure models suggest throwing in an inciting incident and call to adventure.

This still of Ron Stallworth and Flip Zimmerman connecting and hatching their plan from Spike Lee’s BlacKkKlansan feels the most indicative of this moment to me.

Source: BlacKkKlansman on Film-Grab.

Things heat up as we head to the…

Beat 4: The point of no return.

The point of no return is the moment the tension rises to the point where conflict is inevitable. The story’s central tension has taken off, and our protagonists have no choice but to continue forward. 

They are then thrust forward into action, creating rising suspense that drives the story to a point where they cannot turn back.

There’s really a no better example of this than when Marty McFly gets trapped in the future in Back to the Future. He’s in the new world now, and the tension becomes clear: he has to escape without messing up the past so bad that he ruins his own future.

Source: Back to the Future on Film-Grab.

Now, it’s time to escalate the conflict

Beat 5: The conflict escalation.

We are now locked into the story’s central conflict, so this story beat is all about how the story continues to escalate tensions towards the inevitable conclusion.

In the conflict escalation stage, the stakes should always be getting higher and higher. Since this is The Hollywood Model, this beat in the story obviously takes up the bulk of the screen time.

No movie genre does this sequence better than the action movie. However, I like how the Rocky sequel/spin-off Creed plays with this sequence to build the dramatic stakes of the relationship between Adonis and Rocky, mirroring the rising stakes of Adonis’ fights.

Source: Creed on Film-Grab.

As you can see, your protagonist must be put through the wringer. They’ve got to overcome challenge after challenge, each one more impossible to overcome than the last, increasing the audience’s suspense whether or not they can reach their goals while building towards the climax.

Beat 6: The climax.  

The climax of the film is pretty self-explanatory. In The Hollywood Model, it’s when the central tension is finally resolved.

If you think of your story’s narrative arc like a bowstring, you want to be constantly twisting the string tighter and tighter until it eventually becomes too tightly wound and snaps.

The climax of your story should feel inevitable. No matter what the protagonist does, this moment was destined to occur because of every step along the way that escalated it to this point. 

Every genre film has specific conventions regarding the climax unique to their genre, but none are as consistent as the horror genre. 

Inevitably, the thing the protagonist has been running from the whole film must finally be faced, and the best horror movies know how to tie the ghost, ghoul, or goblin haunting them to the main character’s central flaw. 

The Babadook, written and directed by Jennifer Kent, demonstrates this via a terrific climax that ties “facing the monster” to the central theme of the whole film. You’ll have to watch it to get it 😉

Source: The Babadook on Film-Grab.

The final Beat 7: The Resolution.

Once the story’s central tension has been resolved, the story is essentially over – except for an outro that resolves the story and brings the world of the film back to normal.

In essence, the resolution is the come-down after the tension is relieved. The best resolutions guide the audience to reflect on what they’ve just seen vicariously as the characters from the story do the same.

Sometimes, not much is left to be said after the climax is concluded, so resolutions can be as brief or as long as you feel they need to be.

Keep in mind: once the central dramatic tension has been resolved, the audience is ready for the story to come to an end, so don’t overstay your welcome.

“Louis, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship.” – Rick from Casablanca.
Source: Casablanca on Film-Grab.

Final thought: Why use The Hollywood Model?

You may ask yourself why you’d want to use this storytelling model over any of the other ones we’ve shared on this site over the years. 

The reason is simple: this storytelling model gives you more flexibility to think outside the Hero’s Journey’s confines. While the Hero’s Journey is a great resource to help you structure your stories, many writers feel too restricted by its rigid nature. 

By thinking of your stories as one continuous rising action, you can play around with the story’s individual beats. You don’t have to be restricted by refusals of calls or midpoints or any of that nonsense. 

Those story beats will occur naturally as you write anyway, but they can hinder creativity when you feel you need to write to a specific set of rules.

As traditional audiences, there are certain expectations inherent when we sit down in the theater. Still, unless they are studying the stuff, the average movie-goer isn’t going to hold you to some strict standard of how and when things should happen. 

The Hollywood Model lets you break from the more restrictive structure rules to be more free-form and loose. You can play with timelines and structure so long as you build your story’s central tension towards an inevitable confrontation of some kind or another. 

Next time you sit down to write, try thinking of your writing using The Hollywood Model and see if it helps you break from the more rigid structural systems you’re used to. 

If you feel more inspired, stick with it! If not, there’s no shame in sticking to what’s more comfortable. Rules are meant to be broken but also meant to be followed. It’s all up to the writer!

Source: Barton Fink on Film-Grab.

Writer Monique Jones said this of the Coen Brothers film Barton Fink, which feels relevant to this topic: “But sometimes the creative energy that’s within talented people can become a scary entity all its own because of our ability to draw inspiration from any and everything.” – Indiewire.


Grant Harvey is a freelance writer, screenwriter, and filmmaker based out of Los Angeles. When he’s not working on his own feature-length screenplays and television pilots, Grant uses his passion and experience in film and videography to help others learn the tools, strategies, and equipment needed to create high-quality videos as a filmmaker of any skill level.

2 thoughts on “The Hollywood Model As A Screenwriting Tool (With Examples)”

  1. HI Grant, thx for this content of using the Hollywood model. I am student of The Dutch Filmers Academy in the The Netherlands. I am writing my thesis about Tracking shots. Now i am looking for a model to use this to analyse 25 selected trackings shots. The goal of my thesis is to use a objective model to score and rank these 25 differents hots to finally present the “most execellent trackigs hot ever made. Could you maybe point me to some content of a model to use to analyse and score these shots. There are lost of rankings of trackings shots but nobody is telling how they selected these (all more or less personal views..)
    Many thanks in advance N. Bruinier 12 -12 2021

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  2. Hi Noud,

    So you are saying that you want a definitive ranking formula that can be applied to determine whether one tracking shot is actually better than the other. While I’m certainly not the most qualified to answer this, I can help give you some ideas on what to look out for based on what qualities usually make film critics and filmmakers rave about a new tracking shot from this movie or that TV show:

    1. Duration – the length of the shot usually sets a huge milestone. For instance, the length of Alfonso Cuaran’s tracking shots in Children of Men won a ton of accolades at the time and were heralded as groundbreaking based on their length alone. Then when the film Birdman came out, the whole film was conceived as “one continuous take” which won it a lot of praise, though I think technically it was shielded by clever cuts and was actually filmed over multiple takes. I believe this was also the case for 1917, but I don’t know which one has more cuts. Which brings me to the second data point:

    2. Number of cuts – if, for instance, a tracking shot does have cuts, then that would lower its rank. So if a film is “one tracking shot” but with multiple cuts, it would have to be ranked lower based on the actual duration of each shot. If you were to compare Birdman to Children of Men, you would then need to take the longest tracking shot from each and compare them based on length. Interestingly, the film Victoria was actually shot in three continuous takes (I believe they may have cut between the three, but still) so that film could actually rank at the top if based on number of cuts / duration alone.

    3. Movement / distance – for a tracking shot to be “tracking” it needs to be in motion. The next metric would need to be some way to quantify how much “movement” the shot follows. For instance, it could be hard to quantify what makes the tracking shot following Clive Owen’s character in Children of Men stronger than the tracking shot that opens Boogie Nights outside of how long it is. But if you could actually record how much distance the characters walk in terms of steps or kilometers / meters, then you would have some way to account for the actual distance covered, which could be another way to rank each shot.

    4. Scale – now, this one is the second hardest to measure in terms of a quantifiable ranking, but it also should be taken into account. Think of the action sequences in 1917 or Children of Men and compare them to the shots in Victoria or Birdman. Clearly the latter two are more impressive in terms of the scale of production that was required to pull of each shot. That’s not to say that the other shots chasing Michael Keaton around the theater or Laia Costa around Berlin weren’t impressive or complex in their own right. But pulling off action sequences with hundreds if not thousands of moving parts between cast members, intricate set design, and perfectly timed explosives is an incredible feat and should be included in whatever ranking formula you come up with.

    I struggle with this one because you could technically use the production budget as a quantifiable metric, but then that would tip the scale in favor of larger productions, so I don’t think that’s fair. You could also use the hours of prep / rehearsal required to measure “scale”, but that also doesn’t feel quite right. Perhaps the best way to measure this would be some combination of the two plus a simple “wow factor” ranking where you screen the shots in front of a series of neutral audiences and poll them on how impressed they were. In order to keep this fair, you would want to have a different audience of the sample size watch each shot that you are ranking so they don’t compare the shots between each other.

    For instance, if you were going to show the same audience 1917 and then Victoria, they would naturally rank Victoria lower in comparison to 1917. But if you showed one audience Victoria and one audience 1917, then you could gauge how impressive each shot is based on its own merits. Maybe this isn’t the perfect way to do this, but just an idea.

    5. Framing / artistry – this is the metric I will be the least helpful with, as I think this is something that true cinematographers will be able to gauge far better than myself. Perhaps the solution to this metric is to poll a sample size of cinematographers and have them rank the quality of the framing of each shot based on a few core cinematography rules.

    For instance, any old tracking shot can show a lot of movement and cover a lot of distance for a long period of time – but how many can keep the main subject in frame the entire time, while also keeping them lit in a way that’s tied to the emotions of the scene, all while the actor gives a performance that is emotionally true, and still show off all the action happening around the character?

    Which brings me to the last metrics…

    6. Performance – in order to rank if a tracking shot is truly worthy, the performances of the actors have to still resonate with an audience. Its one thing to follow the actor through a perilous journey across vast distances with scale and perfect framing, but is the performance hindered by the cameras rolling so long? In a way, a “one shot” tracking shot leaves the actors completely on their own. The scene will live or die by a single performance. Not only do they have to worry about hitting all their marks and timing on a technical level, they also have to be fully in the moment, because if the performance isn’t there, who cares if the shot is a one-take? By default, the tracking shots that make it into the film must have strong performances, but the longer the shot gets, the harder it is for the performance to remain dialed in the entire time. Could there be a great shot where the actor loses steam halfway through before gaining momentum and getting it back by the end? If so, this could lower its rank, and put it below another, shorter or less technically-complex shot. Film is, after all, a medium for emotional storytelling, and actors are the vessels through which the audience experiences the emotions of the story. If we disconnect from them, a shot can be as impressive as it wants – but it won’t make a great story.

    Okay, so those are my ideas! Now how you formulate these into a ranking system is anyone’s guess. For the purpose of your thesis, I would probably give each metric a weight to it based on what you personally value. For instance, if you value the technical aspects more than the theatrical, then by all means, weight them higher. If you value the artistry more than a shot’s length, then definitely weight the framing and performance higher than duration or distance covered. It’s up to you from here, but hopefully this helps you organize your own thoughts to decide what you agree with and what you don’t. If you have any other questions, feel free to reach out.

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